Teh Wozzinator

Argh! Another poem that was deleted before I got to it. I may not read anything ever again.... Teh Wozzinator

Wow...delete...how...deep lol... I know what it means... but now I'm curious as to what the poem was originally. Teh Wozzinator

You're really not going to get feedback on this I'm afraid. Before anyone is going to really seriously review this, you need to reformat and proofread this. You need spaces ...

I've read part three, and honestly... I liked it. I don't have time for a good edit now, but there is one thing I wanted to say: "It was thin, ...

Whoa! Dude! That last part was amazing! I loved it! There was only one sentence that made no sense to me: All his strength let him do was object with ...

Well, I'm planning on this story being it's own book, but if it is too short, I can turn it into a novella and add some short stories on as ...

wow, people really are liking this chapter.... actually, this is one of my favorite so far...probably my favorite of the ones that I've posted on YWS. (I liked writing "The ...

Hey Valor, me again. Lol! Thanks for PMing me.... Anyways, I really don't have time for a part two edit right now, but I might later today. I just wanted ...

that was "not a lot of grammar"??? I wonder what it'd be like to have a lot grammar problems.... lol hmm, you're right about descriptions for his brother, I totally ...

Okay, thanks...yeah, I should've put the "old man" parts in italics. i guess i'll fix that in word.... thanks for reading!

ok, thanks...next time i'll look for that forum so that i can post it there to start with...

haha, great comment! lolol... hey, here's a really weird and stupid haiku... that rhymes! lol Haiku de Chip Why would you want those, When you get Ranch Doritos, And/or corn ...

If you don't have anything to comment on the story, please don't post. It really isn't that long, compared to some of the stuff on here. And it's not that ...

w00t!!! you win!!! haha...yeah, "Striped Ones" was the clue. i forgot to post the "creature challenge" as I'm calling it, in the first post. lol, congrats. Teh Wozzinator

Actually, I was going to see if you could guess what the stranger was. There's really only one good clue, but it also hints at it from his description and ...